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Alex England's avatar

I cannot read this without it affecting my pattern of breathing in a positive way, that makes this a wonderfully powerful poem

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Ela Beyond's avatar

Thank you. That's neat actually. I am practicing martial arts and breathing is huge there.

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Christian Chacon's avatar

Nice poem, Ela. The imagry you used is beautiful too. Thank you for sharing.

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donnaié.'s avatar

I love how relaxing this poem is 💜 this is lovely work!

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Martin Garcia's avatar

To calm down I take deep breaths and now I will think of this calming poem. Thank you for sharing and I hope you had a great Friday.

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Ricardo Guzman Jr's avatar

You have a beautiful way with words. This felt like a meditation.

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